2019-01-16 13:18:01 编辑:常州环球教育 浏览:(639次)
在图表作文中存在随时间变化而变化的数据和信息,因此,在进行这类图表作文的构思时,需要把握一个基本的准则,下面常州环球教育为你详细讲述应该怎么做。
1、一个句子的主语和谓语动词应该能够反映句子中的重要的意思。
例如:The situation that resulted in my grandfather's not being able to studyengineering was that his father needed help on the farm.
从意思上来分析,上面这句话需要表达的重要的概念是“grandfather’s not being able to study”,而在表达这个概念时,原句用的主语是situation,谓语动词是was,不能强调需要表达的重点概念,可以改为下面这句话:My grandfather couldn't study engineering because his father needed help on the farm.
2、避免频繁使用“there be”结构,例如下面的句子:
There were 25 cows on the farm that my grandfather had to milk every day. It was hard work for my grandfather.
可以改为:My grandfather worked hard. He had to milk 25 cows on the farm every day.
更简洁的句式为:My grandfather worked hard milking 25 cows daily.
3、把从句改为短语或单词。例如:Dairy cows were raised on the farm, which was located100 kilometers from the nearest university and was in an area that was remote.
雅思课程老师介绍简介的表达方式为:The dairy farm was located in a remote area, 100 kilometers to the nearest university.
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