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2019年11月7日雅思写作真题思路解析

2019-11-09 13:53:54 编辑:常州环球教育 浏览:(180次)

11月7日的雅思考试结束啦,感觉最近大陆亚太的写作题目越来越抽象了,大家有没有觉得难度上升呀?我们一起来看看常州环球教育对本次考试的解析吧!


11-07  双边类 – 社会话题

In some cultures, the old age is more valued, while in some cultures the youth is more valued. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

题目大意:有人更推崇人生的老年阶段,有人更推崇人生的青年阶段。讨论双边并给出你的观点。


思路:

  • 双边讨论类的题目,可以自由讨论双方各自的利弊。这两个观点,都有合理性,但其合理性需要满足特定的条件下才能成立;

  • 我的观点就是双方都有道理:不同的人生阶段有不同的需求和目标,也才会侧重不同的人生观;

  • 两个主体段分别讨论双方的合理性,并给出限定条件和导致这种观点产生的前提;


关键词:

  • the old age:老年阶段是个抽象概念,其具象化的内容包括这一阶段的具体生活内容,如更多享受家庭生活,而更少的工作压力;

  • the youth:青年阶段也是个抽象概念,其具象化的内容包括进取心,创业和经济成就等;


提纲梳理如下:



范文

Some people attached more importance on old age, whereas adolescence is given more priority by others. I would say it is not an either-or question as each opinion has its justification in terms of the individual’s attitude toward life.


From the perspective of senior citizens, it does make sense that twilight years bring them more pleasure to their lives. At the economic level, after years of hectic life in their younger days, many adults have laid a solid economic foundation to afford their own houses and feed families, which makes it possible for them to spend more time on family life instead of immersing in work day and night; this is particularly obvious for those in retirement, who can fully enjoy life by pension. From the aspect of mentality, what is the more frequently mentioned is the maturity that endows the elders with the exclusive wisdom and sophisticated insight into problems in both reality and ideology, which allows them to cope with tricky conditions more calmly than their younger counterparts.


However, what is applauded by senior members of society does not translate well to young minds who aspire for a more emotional and ambitious way of life. Unlike adults who have already gone through the stage of struggle and therefore are adapted to an easy life, most youngsters are in the climax of their ambitions in career success and eagerness to earn a higher quality of life, and most importantly, they boast the needed physical stamina and the willingness to take challenges. It is these features that compel them to embrace a more enterprising lifestyle, either by exhibiting their competence in workplaces for promotion or to further their potentials learning new vocational skills in leisure time.


In conclusion, it looks to me that it would be simple-minded to label either of the two life attitudes as more justifiable if we do not take into consideration different circumstances and goals in specific stage of life.


相关词汇:

adolescence 青春期

twilight years  暮年

immerse  投入

pension 养老金

mentality  处事方式

sophisticated  老练的

insight  洞察力

tricky 难应付的

ambitious  有抱负的

stamina  精力

enterprising  有进取心的


类似话题:双边讨论 - 社会类

Some people think young people are not suitable for important positions in the government, while other people think it is a good idea for young people to take on these positions. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. (2015-10-21)


参考观点:

青年担任政府要职的最主要的好处是能为政府带来新鲜血液,改善原有的官僚作风,这可能会带来更高的工作效率和更务实的政策。

参考单词:efficiency, practical, bureaucracy


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