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托福写作语法问题

2018-12-18 13:46:28 编辑:常州环球教育 浏览:(811次)

  托福的写作高分不是简单的背诵模板,模仿写作就能实现的,托福作文思路的顺畅、内容的逻辑性、语言的包装等等都是关乎托福作文成绩的因素比如语法问题,下面常州环球教育为你介绍。


  1. 用词不当


  原:The absence of groupwork is a disaster for teenagers in modern society.


  改:The absence of teamwork is a disaster for teenagers in modern society.


  评:groupwork是“分组”或者“小组集体任务”的意思。这位同学原本想说teamwork“团队合作”,却用了一个看起来很像,但实际完全不同的词,表达出来的意思就风马牛不相及了。


  原:You will be dangerous if you keep moving without a clear view of the whole picture.


  改:You will be in danger if you keep moving without a clear view of the whole picture.


  评:dangerous表示所修饰的对象是“带来危险的,有危险性的”,而be in danger才是“身处险境”的意思。到底谁才是威胁呢?


  2. 搭配错误


  原:Nowadays, people are crazy pursuing to be excellent.


  改:Nowadays, people are crazy about excellence.


  评:这位同学显然记错了be crazy about sth. 这个用法,写出来的句子自然会出问题啦。


  原:Besides, public speech can effectively increase your communication skills, which facilitate your salesman career.


  改:Besides, public speech can effectively improve your communication skills, which facilitate your salesman career.


  评:此处是一个明显的动宾搭配错误。“提高……技巧”应该是improve the skills,而不是increase the skills.

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